Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Photo First Pass Critique

My critique was very constructive.

I need to fix the consistency of speed between the car and the ball, I need to move the boy back and thus the opening shot, as well as to check the curves of the shot. Having the ball and the car different speeds creates a very noticeable discrepancy in the movement that pulls you out of the scene. By moving the boy back, I can create a more interesting composition throughout as well as having more background to work with. I can see all of these working really well. 

A few notes that I expected, and have been working on, was the quality and edges of the layers. A full resolution and some more time with in Photoshop should smooth that out. Nothing too crazy, but  very helpful.






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